eh...

I mean i cant say it was bad so high five on that note but at the same time it just felt like it was lacking epicness to it... please add more epicness

i was a lil generous

considering your still in school obviously for this... what mostly got you brownie points was the story although short i saw brief animation sequences which captured the climate like when he shuffled himself against the wall. Id like to see you continue this and work a little longer on the art. I know deadlines suck... keep at it